Sharing our writing with a friend…

I can organise my ideas in a logical order, making sure I use sequence words.

This week, we have been working on a piece of writing about a journey to school, inspired by “The Secret Shortcut”. We began by drawing a map that included all the creative and imaginative things that we saw on our way to school (from huge burgers to jelly mountains). Then, following our map, we wrote our stories with as much detail and description as we could! Our focus was on the organisation of our writing and using sequence words.  Today, we shared our writing with a friend and received some feedback.


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